Kerr-Ann Dempster

Author of Beneath Scarlett Valley, ice cream eater, sandcastle builder, and book devourer. Love books too? Join me!

Three and a Half Stars

Ataxia and the Ravine of Lost Dreams - Rachel Barnard




Ataxia features a great heroine and engaging storyline. 

The dystopian setting is believable. I could easily see our world becoming like this.

I liked being inside MC’s head. She didn’t leave me bored or make me want to throw my eReader away.

The action scenes in the Cube. Love!


Some paragraphs were too long. One went on for a page and a half. It was hard on the eyes.

Jeanie. Everything about this character rubbed me the wrong way, but that’s just me. 

The ending felt rushed.

Overall, it was a fun read. I will be checking out more of Rachel Barnard’s work to see what her other stories are like.